"Along the road were coupld maid & swain"

Along the road were coupld maid & swain
& dick from dolly now for gifts did sue
Hed gen her ribbons & he deemd again
Some kind return as nothing but his due
& he told things as ploughmen rarely knew
Bout breaking hearts & pains—a mighty spell
Her sunday clo'hs might damage wi the dew
She quite forgot them while he talkd so well
She gave the contest up at last to what no words dare tell

(Village Minstrel LXIX, but with Clare's original ending)

The poem is the subject of a letter from Clare to Taylor dated Sunday, 17th February 1821, in which he says this, "I have got the verse from Stamford & alterd it    I think just such as you can wish     no better to be done -- at least indelicacy is lost or the delicate will be damd puzzld to attribut that to it"

It is clear that the text in VM was a compromise after 'negotiation' between Taylor and Clare.  Clare went on to say in his letter, "I am pleasd with it by throwing such disguise over it to think how it will wrack the prudes to find fault     there is somthing in it but theyll know not were to get at it -- tis quite delicate now" (!)

Rather like "To an early cowslip" -- also in Volume I of VM -- which Clare managed to slip past Taylor unaltered, who entirely missed the erotic nature of the subject.

Song - "Sweet comes the morning"

[Image: One of Lady Clementina Hawarden's lovely daughters, photographed around 1860]

Sweet comes the morning,
In natures adorning,
And bright shines the dew, on the buds o' the thorn,
Where Mary Ann rambles,
Through sloe trees, and brambles,
She's sweeter than wild flowers that open at morn;
She's a rose i' the dew love,
Nothing's sweeter than true love,
She's as gay as the poppy, that grows in the corn.

Her eyes they are bright love,
Her bosom's snow white love,
And her voice is like songs o' the birds in the grove:
She's handsome, and bonny,
And fairer than onny,
And her person and actions, are natures, and love,
She has the bloom o' a' roses,
She is the breath o' sweet posies,
She's a' pure as the brood i' the nest o' the dove.

O' earths fairest daughters,
Voiced like falling waters,
She walks down the meadows, than blossoms more fair,
Oh her bosom, right fair is,
And her rose cheek, so rare is,
And parted, and lovely, her glossy black hair:
Her bosom's soft whiteness,
 The sun in its brightness,
 Has never been seen, so bewitchingly fair.

The dewy grass glitters,
The house swallow twitters,
And through the sky floats, in its visions o' bliss,
The lark soars on high,
On cowslips the dews lie,
And the best day's o' summer, are nothing like this:
When Mary Ann rambles,
Th[r]oug[h] hedge rows, and brambles,
The soft gales o' Spring are the seasons o' bliss.

LP II 916 (Knight transcript)

John Clare and footpath walking

John Clare is the genius of the footpath. So poignant is his statement on the road that it tends to overlay his many and various statements on the footpaths. That wretched road journey, in July 1841, just after his forty-sixth birthday, when he was alone, weakening and penniless, and when he had to, as he said, “lay down with my head towards the north to show myself the steering point in the morning”, was a walk entirely isolated from every other walk he had made, or would ever make. 

Clare was more than acquainted with the way, that simplest, purest, most eloquent of ways, the footpath. And life only went wrong when he was diverted from it. He knew where he stood. He knew where he should walk. He knew when he should drop down. He knew what no other English writer knew or knows, which is what the English countryman's eyes saw, or sees, in its purity … we know that countless people, whilst on the way to work, or at work itself, are unwittingly visionary, and that they do not pass through these scenes on earth without taking them in, and wondering at them sometimes. What they -- or few of us do, is to drop down in our tracks to write because the need to write is overwhelming, as it is with writers. 

There were days when Clare could not follow the footpaths. On Thursday 23 September 1824 he writes: “A wet day did nothing but nurse my illness Coud not have walkd out had it been fine very disturbd in conscience about the troubles of being forcd to endure life & dye by inches & the anguish of leaving my childern & the dark porch of eternity whence none returns to tell the tale of their reception” (Natural History, p. 181) 

 But a few weeks later - what a change? Sunday 31 October 1824 “Took a walk got some branches of fee spindle tree with its pink colord berys that shine beautifully in the pale sun - found for fee first time 'fee herb true love' or 'one berry' [Paris quatrifollia} in Oxey Wood brought a root home to set in my garden” (Natural History, p. 197) 

 Did we but comprehend it, a great amount of our best poetry, novels and essays smell, not of the lamp, but of dust, mud, grit, pollen, and, I expect, sweat. 

Ronald Blythe ~ John Clare Society Journal, 14, 1995

There is a path a little path

There is a path a little path
Goes winding thru the meadow hay 

That leadeth on oer many a swath 
A sweet and pleasant way
& heres a stile to rest upon
& see the arches all anew
That carrys the traveller safely on 

When wild floods roar below 

"Hidden Treasures" (2016)

My Bonny Jane

The cows are from the pasture gone  The sheep are bleating in the pen
The path they travelled one by one  Is o'er the fallows beat agen
The sparrow chelps along the eaves  The whasp hums in the window pane
And I'll of labour take my leave  And gang and court young bonny Jane

The plums are misted o'er wi' dew  And rosey streaks the apples wear
But Jinney's cheeks a sweeter hue  Than either apple plumb or pear
The sun sinks o'er the willows grey  And clammy got the fields o' grain
And at her own home ends that day  I kissed the lips O bonny Jane

Her dark [hair] hangs in parted curl  Aside her forehead white as snow
She seemed a maid [of] other worlds  Too fair for any thing below
We stood beside the turnpike way  Such meetings seldom come again
That piece of animated clay  I clasped and kissed young bonny Jane

The mallow looked like satin flowers  Cut by some fond and fairy queen
The nettle fit for garden bowers  Did no where look so richly green
They cant' be common nettles sure  I said and stooped to look again
But love stood there blind eyes to cure  My ain sweet fairy bonny Jane

The bee resumed its honey tone around  And searched the alloes bloom
The windows too were open thrown  For buzing whasps to leave the room
Her hair was lappit in a comb  Then twisted glossy round again
That sweet white bosome was loves home  O my ain dear bonny Jane

The hens had clockit up to bed  The chicks where yet within the pen
The sparrows from the wheatfields sped  To Jinney's mossy eaves agen
O' Jinney is the bonny flower  The severest parting pain
Wi' many a vow and promise fair  I kissed and left my bonny Jane

The sun set red the weary crow  Flew homeward to the woods agen
The willows grey waved too and fro  And dews fell like a misty rain
She threw her kerchief o'er her hair  Her fond kiss cured the parting pain
Wi' many a vow and promise fair  I kissed and left my bonny Jane

LP II 745
KT ii 84-5

Another amazing poem from Clare's incarceration, that may be read as one, two or three separate poems.  Again in no collections apart from the Clarendon editions.

Some like to rocks gleam (excerpt)

Some like to rocks gleam in their wondering eye
Mid shoreless seas & some go swifter bye
Like mighty ships still charging on their way
To other ships move beautiful than they

Some shaped like boats their placid track pursue
Oer gentle billows of a different hue
Soft as the paper ships they often make
& float on curdling brook or meadow lake

Some white like palaces of marble seems
The towers of heaven they’re called in dreams
& which his waking fancys grandly shine
The abodes of one that instant suns divine

Hidden Treasures (2016)
edited Roger Rowe

Tall grows the nettle by the hedgeway side

Tall grows the nettle by the hedgeway side
& bye the old barn end they shade the wall
In sunshine nodding to the angry tide
Of winds that winnows bye—these one & all
Makes up the harmony of Spring—& all
That passes feel a sudden love for flowers
They look so green—& when the soft showers fall
 They grow so fast—Dock Burdocks Henbane—all
Who loves not wild flowers bye the old stone wall

LP I 186