[Image: Anne Lee]
Is this a poem about the beauties of Walkerd and therefore written especially with Patty in mind? Unfortunately, it is now virtually impossible to get anywhere near Walkherd Lodge, although Mike Hobson did manage two atmospheric photographs that we used in our book "The Poet in Love"... the story of the meeting, courtship and marriage of John and Patty.
Is it significant that in line 3 Clare deleted ‘gardens’ and substituted ‘edens’? Certainly we think that the poem beautifully describes the environs of the Lodge. (RR & ProfER)
Tho thou
wert not the place of my being & birth
Tho I spent
not the sports of my childhood in thee
Mid the dear
spots we call edens on earth
Thou art one
of the fairest thats known unto me
Five
beautiful springs thee & thine have I known
Thy woods
& thy brooks winding peacful at will
Thy heaths
& like hermitage standing alone
Thy cottage
that smoaks by the side of a hill
I have
rambld the plains were no being beside
Hath
intruded the whole summers day
& followd
the shepherds paths dimly descryd
By the
hedges all lind with dog roses & may
& wilds
were no tracks but the rabbits hath been
Were flowers
bloom untouched till they dye
Were the
whole summer thro neer a schoolboy is seen
& the
linnets brood lives in its nest till they flue
I have turnd
to thy springs with the birds when adry
& hunted
the flowers with the hoarse honey bee
& the
few scantly pleasances that manhood supply
Were some of
them sought for & gathered in thee
& a
flower that grew with thee the fairest of all
That decks
the soft bosom of april & may
Blooming
lovly & wild by the lone cottage wall
Love wood it
with rapture & won it away
& Ive
walkd oer thy wilds with that flower I esteem
& livd
in the peace of her cottage a guest
& mused
by the charms of thy hearth & thy shame
As she
shrunk on our walks on my bosom to rest
& the
bowers on thy heaths sprinkld over with cows
Were we sat
down in some a cool minute to spend
Enjoying the
wind that fannd thro the green boughs
Where I left
them & bade them farwell like a friend
Tho spring
brings the wild heath its annual bloom
Spreading
white sheets of flowers on
Yet tyrants
have been with the friends of her home
&
strangers are there to inhabit it now
The footpath
as usual inviteth us on
& the old
cottage chimney still peeps oer the dell
But the
friends of the blossom I gathered are gone
& bidden
the fields & the dwelling farwell
We might
roam as wont to the heaths yellow oer
With furze
flowers & lamb toe that creeping I rove
Down the
crookd path that leads to the fountain once more
The scenes
of her childhood & haunts of her love
& the
cottage might shine just the same in her eye
But the
voice of old welcomes woud meet us no more
We might
pass her lovd dwelling as strangers pass by
& no eye
would notice or open the door
I lovd the
dear haunts of the sweet solitudes
That round
its lome walls in the circle do lye
Were no
living thing all the season intrudes
But a bird
or a bee humming wearisome bye
& Ive
hunted for spots by the brook & have found
The lonliest
existing an hour to abide
With nought
but the green light of trees flitting round
& the
shadow that seemed stretchd asleep by my side
The wood
rides as wont wound beneath the oak bough
Still
tempting the eye that admires to rove on
But stranger
feet with in their lonliness now
& their
old fellow hermits that lovd them are gone
The birds in
the gardens shades nesting among
As fond of
their neighbours that used to dwell bye
Hear strange
voices now & stop short in the song
&
startled peep down of fresh faces flye
The sparrows
no doubt will grow coy & complain
To medlesome
foes that their freedom is oer
& the
fond robin pauses ere he ventures again
To pick up
the crumbles of bread by the door
The martin
that comes to the cottage repairs
& once
met a welcome & quiet enjoyd
May now find
a tyrant as cruel as theirs
&
morning retreat its dwelling destroyd
The black
bee that hums by the mud creviced wall
Eaen they
may old friend & old neighbours deplore
While
meddlesome childen with frolicsome brawl
Shoutest
loudly that friendship & freedom is oer
Ive seen
these delights in their season of peace
When their
old friends & neighbours was labouring nigh
Ere a
tyrants intrusions had warnd them to cease
& I
deeply regret that such seasons are bye
Long long in
seclusion their lives had been nurst
Neighbours
only to blossoms to birds & to bees
Till plumb
stones & damsons set when they came first
& small
apple curnels had grown up to trees
& a
thorn that was not when they came to the spot
Which a linnet
might bring when an awe from the dell
Had grown
when thet left half as high as the cot
& quite
overshadowed the cub of the well
The wood
bine that crept up the door & peepd in
May with
them of its bloom & its home be bereft
That clung
to the cot with its inmates akin
& they
felt that it viewd them as such when they left
When they
left birds & flowers all their neighbours behind
In the nise
& the strife of a village to dwell
They seemd
to have borrowd the voice of the wind
& to
sigh when their last look turnd on them “farewell”
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